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Post by Guan Jin on Dec 8, 2007 4:05:52 GMT -5
Jin was hit badly. He had lost his right eye (see my avy) and had puncture wounds all ovwer his body. but he wasn't bad. His shield had saved him he got up and smashed all the arrows off his shield. He scanned the battlefield looking for where Dan had fallen hoping he wasn't dead. He eventually found dan covered in arrows. He picked Dans body up and held it and cried into it. He saw that the men told to scour the battlefield and kill survivours were fast approaching him.
"You...you....YOUR GOING TO PAY!"
Jin flew at them at incredible speeds 1 dead 2 dead 3 dead 4 dead 5 dead 6 dead 7 dead 8 dead 9 dead 10 dead. He soon realised that he had attracted attention so he went back to pick Dan's body up and take it home with him. He just picked it up and heard a crunch on the ground he whipped round but was too late. 5 spears had pierced all his organs in his chest. But not the heart. Until a lone arrow came and along a pierced the heart. This was no ordinary arrow though. It open up inside of the heart and threw shrapnel everywhere to make sure the job was done. Jin fell to the ground. He dropped his shield and he dropped his spear. his sword dropped to...Then all was dark in Shao jin's Eyes
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Post by Guan Dan on Dec 8, 2007 10:48:12 GMT -5
Dan stood up the flame burned is eyes he stood up and yanked the arrows out of his chest and marched to wards the enemy, he was running on pure adrenaline that was all that kept him going. the attackers stood still in fright nobody could of survived that he drew near and started to slash into the stunned enemy's leaving none alive. He marched back to wards his brothers body and carried it back to his kingdom in his arms.
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